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December 21st, 2001, 06:29 PM
#1
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Somewhere betwixt,
The picturesque images in my brain,
And the thunderous manifestations of my voice,
Silence engulfed my thoughts.
And she walked away,
Surrounded by stark darkness.
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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...
If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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December 21st, 2001, 06:37 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
that was freakin' good.
i like it.
it was as if you were giving a title to an ancient painting.
excellent.
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January 10th, 2002, 03:59 AM
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I liked it too!Good job brother hanni.You were boastful and full of yourself and she saw through you shet.
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"Your a Hi plains woman Janet"
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January 10th, 2002, 07:09 AM
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so i take it, you really DO know hannibal...
(tee hee)
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January 14th, 2002, 05:01 AM
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i liked this. i would take the comma out in the first line. but it was good. really good...
wednesday....three days away. no diets.
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January 16th, 2002, 11:55 AM
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i really liked this one, too...you are really good with tailoring words and literary devices to convey your meaning in a really great way. you are getting better all the time..
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January 16th, 2002, 12:22 PM
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Looking back, I posted this one once before, my apologies to posting the same thing twice :P
I didn't even realize it until I was looking WAYYYYYYY back.
HoneyK, been a while since you last posted anything new, what's up? Takin a break? or just havin a drout?
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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...
If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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